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Amazing

"Omgoodness! What a great book! Definitely keeps you wanting more! Don't skip this one! "

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Inheritance

"Really good book"

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Kim

"Great book!! Love the story line and suspense."

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Great story

"Great story, different, interesting, strong and with a unexpected end. The end was bittersweet, I wish it would end a little bit different but I get it life isn't fair either. The end was open as if there is a possibility for a sequel, hope so."

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The Inheritance

"So many emotions are swirling sodium’s this fabulous story… intrigue, fear, anger, sorrow and ultimately joy! Thank you for sharing this story and amazing characters!"

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The Inheritance

"Oh my! What a great story. I am so thrilled for you, this was a great adventure. I could tell that some scenes were more enthralling for you to write than others. That would be my only tid bit. If you detailed the areas that weren't so interesting - like the plane being flown by another pilot. Or when the father is shot it got a little confusing. BUT you are a writer and you have immense talent and I loved your story, makes me want to move to the country :) Thank you"

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The inheritance

"I really enjoyed the story. It made me cry a few times through the chapters, I laughed and I appreciated the little advice here and there. I believe this story is a gem, with a little editing I believe I'd be perfect."

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The Inheritance

"Warning! This novel is a tear jerker, both good and bad tears. Lots of suspense and romance. Some sex, but most is implied. This is definitely a book I would recommend and will probably read again."

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Inheritance

"This was a really good read! Great job!"

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Great stor, loved it.

"Loved all the characters and the twists and turns in the story also the way it ended not like a fairytale"

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The Inheritance

"Its a fabulous story! It is both a heartwarming and a heartbreaking story. You got me hooked up. I couldn't put it down once i started reading it though it was impossible to finish it in one setting. I just didn't like the scenario of natalie's death😩. She shouldn't have died☺... Great work anyway!👍"

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Fantastic!

"Great storyline. Keeps you guessing!"

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Recommend reading

"This story had me interested from the start . Brilliant story line and great character view. "

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Really really enjoyed this story!!

"This story was fabulous! The characters are great with each a personality of their own. The storyline and plot twist are beyond amazing. Keeps you on your toes the entire time. The story will also pull on your heartstrings hard. It simply has everything you need for a great book. I spent the day reading it from beginning to end. Everyone should read it, you’ll love it "

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Great book

"Really great book "

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Good story

"It's a good resd"

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Main male character is cringey

"I was excited it was going well.. but when you speed up romance it just became bland for me like a wattpad story and seems forced. I get fetish themes in a story like DDLG, or cold turned warm male which makes this cliche but some parts were cringe to me. I like reading cliche sometimes but this gave me Girl in a refrigerator vibes.. Writing style is good except those parts personally. "

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