Tamara Ravenheart

A hopeless romantic with dreams of adventure. Just another reader trying to write her own story.

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Stoic

I'm still crying my eyes out...
When i first started to read this story i had my doubts about it but decided to give it a try since it has an Inkitt Award and i'm very happy i did because it's one of the best stories i've read so far.
I experienced a rollercoaster of emotions while reading it, the way the author plays with the points of view of the main characters is just perfect and gives you a glimpse of the overall story but without revealing to much til the very end, keeping you on your toes.
I fully recomend everyone to read it.
it's a master piece.

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Hooked

I like the story very much. The characters develpment is great and the plot keeps me wanting more at the end of each chapter. The descriptions aren't too explained but are long enough to give you a good picture of the scene. The grammar and puntuaction need to improve, it is obvious the author isn't native speaker but it is a grat job nonetheless.

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The arrangement

I really liked this story. It's obvious the author put a lot of effort in the character development and the chapters are beautifully written. I personally believe there is space for improvement (specially in the Africa topic), but considering it's a fiction story made for entertainment, i think it's fine (I'm from a country with a lot of prejudice and clichés, so i kinda get it).

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Assisting his assistant

The story is soooo good. I had fun in (almost) every chapter. I loved how the author mixed sweet and inocent with steamy sexyness. There are some minor details with the writing skills but it doesn't diminish the story. Great job!

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One night long ago

I'm still shaking. The story is sooo good (not only the steamy parts, which are amazing btw), but that final cliffhanger was ilegal. Can't wait to read the next book. Great job as always, Raven!

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The Alien Prince's Bride

This story is amazing. The descriptions are beautiful and the universe the author created is very interesting, the dialoges are so funny and the interactions between the characters are so beautiful.
I truly beleive this book is saga material, I'd love to read more about Angela and Exelios (or even their children).

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Skyheart Ranch

Amazing story. It was so hard to read some chapters, but i loved all the wholesome moments a phrases of wisdom.

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Wyatt

Your writting style is amazing, the way you transmit your characters' emotions is very intense. I felt my heart breaking, my face flushing and tears rolled down my cheeks chapter after chapter. I love the way you portrait real life experiences and not everything is pink but filled with torns sometimes.

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The rainy season

It's a nice short story. It's well written, transmiting the feelings of themain characters and it leaves you satisfied and happy. I fully recomend this story if you want an innocent quick build up romance.

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The consort

This story wasn't what I expected... It was so much better! It isn't the typical and cliché werewolf story. The author takes this mytical creature, twist it a couple times and creates a whole new World full of possibilities.
What I lovee the most is that the main characters aren't perfect nor magically become the best persons overnight; you can ser their growth (along with their mistakes) chapter by chapter.
The author did an outstanding job with this story and i can't wait to read more.

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The call of Thalassa

This story is mesmerizing. I found it by chance and couldn't put it down until I finished it. A very happy accident, and I enjoyed it so much. The writing style is beautiful, poetic. The descriptions are perfect and every chapter leaves you wanting more.
The plot is intriguing and flows naturaly. I can't wait to read more.

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Hunter

Loved the story. The author showed us some of the imperfect sides of life; mistakes, betrayal, hurt, but also selfgrowth, friendship and the upside downs of love. I absolutelly recomend Hunter and can't wait to read some more.

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Captured Sunlight

I was hooked from the very first chapter. The world the author created is amazing, very original and well described. And the story is enticing, i got caught in the main character emotions, i suffered with them, laughed at the sassy remarks and my heart swelled with the love and tender i read. It leaves you thriving for more and i can't wait to read more from this saga.
I fully recomend this book.
Congratulations author.

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His lovely pet

This book is great. The love story and the drama behind is great. I had some issues with the grammar and spelling, but I enjoyed it overall. I hope you can finish the book here before publishing it.

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The alpha's little witch

I really liked this story. It's so funny, intense and dramatic. It's also easy to read and the story flows effortlessly. You won't be able to put it down.
Well done, author! I'm looking forward to read more from you.

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The Queen in Shadows

This book is amazing. The story is very complete, with happyness, heartbreak, cliffhangers, emotional moments and a great clousure. I wouldn't mind if there were to be a sequel.

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Lockwood Mansion

The author has a very vivid writing style.
The story kept me on my toes for most of the chapters and the descriptions are very exciting. I definitely recomend this book, but i don't recomend that you get too emotionally involved with the characters because it's a rollercoaster of love-hate.
Looking forward for the next book!

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Fairy Godmother

This story is so amazing. It blew my expectations to another dimension. Definitely a must read to all romance-fantasy lovers.

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Fix you

It's a wonderful love story about growth and aceptance. I really enjoyed the plot, i simply couldn't stop reading!
And the songs at the end of the chapters are a nice bonus ;).
I'll definitely keep reading from this author.

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The Whitlock Academy

I loved the story, it's funny, romantic, dramatic and HOT.
I really liked how must of the story is told by one POV but the author gives us other POVs almost at the end just to confirm the impresions formed previously.
Also, i enjoyed a lot that the pull wasn't everything and they had to work out their relationship. It's a must read that will remain in my list.

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Torn

I loved the story. It's sweet and has great character developments.
I also liked how not everything is perfect but everyone makes an effort to work it out, just like in real life.
Can't wait to read the next book.

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Scorched

I enjoyed the story so much.
The characters development are amazing, I loved that they forged a relationship without the intervention of the mate bond.
The plot is exciting and the author makes you laugh, dread, cry and love. It's just perfect.

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White wolf

I loved the story, it's so intense I couldn't stop reading it.
I feel it needs some polish with the grammar, there are many typos (maybe the chapter was written in a rush or something).
But I enjoyed the story very much, it leaves aside the ex's dramma which is common in other werewolf stories and focus in the main characters.
I simply loved it, can't wait to read the sequel.

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No magic

The author is CRAZY!!!
Don't get me wrong, the story is great. I was on my toes the whole time, but the ending... I'm not dissapointed, but i guess the author could've worked harder in the epilogue, the way it is right now seems a bit rushed.
BUT i definitely recomed the book, i enjeyed it and it's very different of everything i've read so far. Give it a chance.

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Moon baby

I really enjoyed the story. It's funny and has just enough drama. The author sure knows how to make cliffhangers.
However, i felt it lacked some girlpower in the end, dunno...
But I really liked the overall and the stramy twins make up for the little lackings in the story; they're a mayor turn on ykwim.
I look forward to read the other stories from this author.

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Chosen love

I really liked the story. It's different from most of the werewolves stories I've read so far, it plays with slightly different rules, which make it very special.
And the plot is very well structured, I can tell the author planed it carefully.
I'm still crying from the last chapter. It was amazing. Great job, author!

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Catching fire 🔥

I liked the story very much. It introduces you to a new world of fantasy, new rules, new creatures. It has drama, action, romance and steam ykwim.My only disappointment is that it ended too fast to my liking. I really enjoyed the story and can't wait to read more.

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I loved it!

The story is so well written and described it is easy to picture everithing that happens.
I also loved how the autor portrayed the strong and independet image of the female lead; and the characters development is just the best.
It has romance, adventure, drama and hot steamy scenes; you could say it's the full package.
I found this story by accident and i'm in to read much more.

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Amazing story

I loved the story. It was amazing how the author managed to write such an entertaining, funny, heartbreaking, sweet story without making it revolve around the alpha's business (you know, almost every story is about the alpha heir or daugther).
This story is differentand fresh. It is very well written and keeps you on your toes most of the time.
I'll definitely read the second book.
Great job, Lanna Fox!

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Short and sweet

I liked the story very much. It has a bit of everything and the author managed to acomodate everything up so that we understand the characters motives and feelings.
I loved the facts that she (the author) explains it is a short story because you kinda know what to expect about the development of it
My only side note would be to double check the grammar and spelling, it is a bit uncomfortable to read as it is.
But great job, author! I'll make sure to read some more from you

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Feedback

Hello there, author.
I'd like to start congratulating you for your amazing job. I started reading this book without knowledge of it beeing part of a series (I recomend you to add that warning in the summary). However, it wasn't hard to catch up with the plot.
Speaking of which, I was hooked after a few chaqpters. And i loved how accurate your descriptions were, i could feel my heart clench with every romantic desception of Cass.
The only thing that i would recomend is to give another grammar check, specially to the last couple of chapters.
¡SPOILER ALERT!
And i would have liked to read a bit more about adrien and sasha's involvement in the kidnaping, I felt that it lacked something...

END OF SPOILER
Besides those little details, i absolutely loved it and will definitely read the other books. xoxo

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Strong female lead!

Hi there, author!
First of all, i loved the story! You succesfully showed to the world how a strong female lead can fell in love and have the support of her mate to achieve her goals, instead of becoming a sweet incompetent mess (as i've seen in other stories).
Your book is full of action, dramma and humor; i can't think of any changes to make it more amazing. It just needs a bit grammar review, but nothing too serious.
Looking forward to your next story. xoxo

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Cheesy-peasy

I loved the sostory overall. It is so easy to read, with just enough cheeesyness and drama to keep you reading.
It is noticeable the author needs to work on her grammar and spelling but nothing that affects dramatically the reading flow.
I didn't like the fact that Camila can't hold her liquor and doesn't know her limits, either. But, besides that, I LOVED it.
Great job!

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Keep your great work!

It was an interesting story. I loved the fact that Sacha was so devoted to her little sister, and i loved her character development. It is a nice love story, with the dramma needed to make it a no-so-pink story. However, i strongly believe it could have been a better story if you had developed a bit more into it. Your ideas are great but sometimes it feels rushed, kinda wreaks the magic.
I believe you do an amazing job, just need to polish it a bit more.

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Note to the author.

Hi there, author. First of all i wanna say you did a great job, i noticed your improvement with each chapter and enjoyed this beautifull story. I must say some things didn't checked on me, like Eathans abusive behavior towards Emma (sometimes) and he copping with Staycy for so long but i understand those were needed in the plot.
I really liked the plot, it was interesting and had enough spicyness ;) , but i think you could have elaborate a bit more in some scenes; like Ethan's father involment and the man in the swamp, in order to add to hte story.
There's only left to congratulate you for your great job and i'm looking forward to read more frome you.
Best regards.
P.S.: Sorry about the misspels, i'm sure i have plenty...

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Great job, author!

I loved the story, it is so different from everything i've read before. I really enjoyed each character personalities and the cliffhangers and plot tiwists. I also apreciate and admire how well written is everything, i'm not a native english speaker and sometimes i struggle trying to understand what the author wanted to say; which wasn't a problem at all in this case.
I think you did an amazing job and can't wait to read more. Thank you so much for taking the time inviting me to read your work. (Sorry for the miss spels)

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Stuning!

I don't know about the loss but i LOVED it. I tought it was imposible to make as good as the first part, but i was wrong! The author managed to make a fun, loving, intriging story full of cliffhangers and plot twist that keeps you wanting more. I look forward to your next book.

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So original

I loved the story and how the author made the characters grow and become so strong. It is a shame the sometimes the redaction gets very confusing and the lasts chapters seem to be a little rushed. But i really liked the overall.

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Can't wait to read more

I loved the story. It's so different the way you introduced sirens into the fantasy world.
I belive it only needs some polish in the punctuation and grammar in order to be perfect.

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I couldn't stop reading

I'm seriously in love with this story. It had me on the edge of my chair chapter after chapter. I could literally feel the main characters emotions... i laughed. I cried, I felt my heart aching... It's so well described, it is detailed enough to imagine everything to the perfection but not so much to make it boring.
It's by far my favourite story and it made me enjoy every part of the story.
The only thing i can give a "negative" critic about is that the author could give it a quiick check up on the grammar and punctuation part. It's still easy to read and the mistakes ain't serious but if a none native speaker can tell there are miss-spells i guess it would be nice to correct them.
However, i love your work, author!

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Thrilled by the story

I finished Sharkbait and (digitally) run straight to chapter one of this story. I love how you are making the mating bond work for her still being a strong and successful woman.
You are doing a great job!

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Oh My Luna!

I'm so so so so excited and happy with this story. It's just PERFECT! I love reading about a strong, beautifull and successful woman who follows her dreams and addapts to the events of life. I also love all the plot twists and cliffhangers, and I really really apreciate how dedicated you are to avoid typos (worst sin ever).
I could go on and on because I really LOVED each chapter. Great work, keep going!

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Great plot! Great plot!

Hello, dear author.
I love your story so far. It's different and refreshing, you keep your female character as a strong woman and I'm enchanted with you not wanting to romanticize abuse or sexual harassment.
The only thing that makes me unhappy about this book is the inconsistency in your style, mixing past and present gives away the lecture. And also, it has so many typos it is hard to read sometimes...

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Strong woman

I really loved this book. I think this is the first story i've read here which doesn't show us women as weak and in need of a strong man to defend and control us. I loved the fact that she remained powerfull and hr will untouched despite (or due) to her love for Luca. Great job!

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Stockholm syndrome

I really like the story. I'm sure that if you dedicated a little more time to details like grammar and more effort into your writing style it would be perfect because it might get confusing at times who is speaking or who you are talking about.

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Prince charming

I like the story, don't take me wrong, is just... I need a bit character development on Erick, Victoria and even the queen. I just need to know a bit more about their intentions, I feel so clueless...
But the plot have me in the edge of my chair at each chapter. Great job!

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These men belong to other time...

May I say first that I looooooove this story so far?
I mean, there are some points I don't like that much but I get it is all in name of having an interesting story.
I applause your imagination and the great effort you are making over here. It has a few typos, nothing a little check up can't manage.
Lots of love to you, dear author.

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Dear God...

I don't know exactly what I was expecting but it definitely went all the way out... I really like the cliffhangers and plottiwsts, sometimes the sexual scenes are a bit too rough to me, but the descriptions are so detailed I can't help but love it.

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Sweetie, I can't with this cliffhangers

I'm so happy about finding this incredible story. I'd never read anything that matches so well hot situations with a sweet and mature loving relationship. To be completely honest I do feel things are moving a bit to fast sometimes but I really like it, though. Keep doing a great job!

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