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Bravo!

"This experimental piece is perhaps the best short of its genre that I've read on this site. As I have no criticisms whatsoever, I'll just heap a bit of praise upon it. Brilliantly executed, astonishingly well written, a beautiful, dark, emotive plot. I'll say it once more. Bravo! Thanks for posting your excellent work. I've only four words left for you.... Don't ever stop writing. Laz."

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