Her POV

"From her POV of solo pleasuring that morphs into her lover turning her thoughts into reality, BRAVO!! As a man, I always need--no want--- to know how it feels for a woman. From her POV. Many stories explore from a male POV or written at a grade school level. You wrote this with dignity and clarity. Well Done! More, please! You drive me to write better! There were only two spots that shifted, but then again this is from a female's POV, not mine as a man. You detailed how she felt his contours, the sensation of climaxing for a woman, her thoughts, and you included the sense of cool breeze fluttering over her, including the man-mountain that doesn't normally sleepover."