Michael

San Antonio

I love creative writing. I've lived and traveled the world before settling in Texas. I am a grandfather of 2 granddaughters, father of 6 sons & profoundly in love. I am retired combat vet.

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Renewed Passion

I like the generation passion renewed.

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Gold stars!

Right away I was drawn into your world. Her awakening sequence was spot on. Her mouth being dry and pasty is realistic. One question, how would she knows her overall state of being, like dark rings around her eyes if she hasn't seen a reflection of herself? Can't wait for more of your world-building.

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Weaponized Werewolves

I love your concept. This is a great YA (Young Adult) story that has a lot of rich plot points. Making your protagonist a young lady in middle school was a nice age adjustment. Prepubescent and in the werewolf sphere. I'd recommend filtering or editing your chapters through ProWritingAid or Grammarly to nitpick some spots. Of the werewolf lore, even with lycanthropes that can shapeshift at will, always follows magical rules. Silver bullets cause instant death for wolves. I'd add a twist to the Armored Ones. Silver-infused liquids (smoothies, teas, coffee, etcetera) ingested can cause their demise. If they are unwilling to die, their death throes will be extremely painful, felt by their pack members, and last for days. If they are willing, their death will be painless, quick, and their pack members will only feel a soft absence/void of the wolf. This would give more gravity to their broad situation.

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BDSM wolf-style love

Dark intimacy bursts on the full moon and it takes Sam by surprise. Her best friend fails to control his inner wolf when the moon rises, her heat at its peak,and the more sadistic of the pack wants to claim her. What is a wolf-woman to do?

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