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The governess

"The story was good. And the sex was awesome. I love how she kept sex different. And with a nice variety"

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The Governess

"How sexy and erotic. Full of bdsm. Loved it."

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ARolePlaying Delight

"very stimulating series of sexual play encounters.. Do not usually read this type of story, but it has me asking why not! Very well written with interesting characters characters and brilliant word play ... "

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The Governess

"Love it and its great"

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The Governess

"That was eye opening hot "

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NICE love the story.

"This was an awsome story. There needs to be more like this. The descriptions were awsome. My imagination was running wild. I did not want the story to end. It needs to continue now that she is able to be a Dom."

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WOAH

"Amazing simply amazing. Ok so, I'm only 15, and I've been looking for stories like this. I originally started reading adult books at a young age, (without my parents knowledge) and this? Is the best I've read in years. Your story is basically everything I've been looking for. I've been trying to expand my knowledge on these things, because im a writer myself. But I like to read and (try too) write stories like this. (but I fail horribly). I find everything about this story, absolutely amazing. This has opened a new understanding and knowledge, that other books have never managed to open before. And has helped me understand a bit more about the people I know, whom are into this stuff. (and do it in real life). So my rating on this story is quite literally 100/100 Or in non overexaggerating terms. 10/10 "

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I Find It Very Intriguing

"It's Quite, fun, to read. This writer is attuned with reality and I DO NOT find it shameful at all although I respect that opinion. For me it opened my eyes to a whole new way of writing and it expanded my imagination, I also find very few to no errors in common writing. The idea of adding a level of interest and mystery by not providing the governesses name early in the text. However a word of advice, if I may, is to add a side story to the piece as to lock the reader in even more, thus making the book addictive. The way you described the sex pulled me in and made me want to pull my boyfriend into the bedroom and do every little thing that you described but you might want to apply some of your own feelings to the characters, this way it may seem as the readers themselves feel as if they are in the experience. Overall I think that if you are looking for new horizons of imagination, this book is for you! Also I want to thank the author of this book for finding his or her true passion for clearly it is writing. Please continue to write and continue to write about the world around you through your beautifully amazing perspective."

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Hello.

"A few years back, I wrote you a really shitty review and I wanted to apologise for that. I realise I was incredibly cruel and said things that...honestly, I should not have said to you about this story. I should have just walked away and not said anything, and I'm sorry for the pain that must've caused you. I hope you and your writing are doing well. Good luck to you!"

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Anonymous

"this was a awesome adventure into a place i knew nothing of once there you cant believe what your reading but your addicted cant put it down never a dull moment with the governess you are sure to be drawn into her world i would say this is one of the best short stories i have read in many years dieing for governess book number two cant wait enjoyed thoroughly 5 stars from me By. C.. L"

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The Governess

"Quite the erotic love/BDSM story. The details with the erotic part was well written and was all there. However, it seemed too focused on just the erotic part. Could have used some more scenes of what happened in between."

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Hott

"Nice💩 and steamy"

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Rape ≠ BDSM

"Do these people not know what consent means??? This isn’t BDSM it’s rape. Thanks for coming to my Ted Talk."

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