What is your opinion?
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"The grammar and descriptions are really good, especially for a non-native English speaker. I like the main character, and the plot is interesting. The dialogue could use some improvement, but overall is solid. Keep up the good work!"
Review
"Ok, so the introduction is good and I liked that you kept it, First person, I don't know why but people think a character introducing themselves is immature (I don't think that way) The plot is different from most of the books I have read. Ok, the chapters are too long then usual but what you can do is like divide them and add them into more chapters that way it wouldn't be a crowdy. Also, leave a cliff-hanging scene at the end of chapters so it can excite the reader to read more. I won't say anything about grammar though I am not a expert at it myself. Plot is good but it's predictable. Identifications are interesting also!! Thanks"
