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What is your opinion?
Awesome
"This writer is writing in her second language. The way she tells a story is very good. I was captured by the opening of the first chapter. Great job Applecider. You are as sweet as your name in writing. Simply Fantastic. 😍 This is a must read story."
Amazing plot
"The plot of the story is intriguing. It keeps the readers wanting for more. There are some grammatical and punctuation errors that the writer can work on for example in the beginning of chapter 3, the tense of the narration changed to present tense and after a few lines it changed back to the past tense. Other that that the vivid descriptions added on to the beauty of the story. Well done! "
