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On his watch

"I really liked that a lot!!!! There was just the right amount of drama and it was tied up quickly...I also love that she was such a strong woman and he helped her to see that! Great story ❤️❤️❤️ Thank you so much for sharing ♥️"

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On my watch

"Very good story. I loved the characters you nailed how you portrayed each one making them seem very realistic. "

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Love it !!!

"I love it your doing awesome miss talking to you 😁"

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Great author…well written

"Liked this book…it went right to the action at the get go!"

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On his watch

"Well written. "

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On His Watch

"Nice to read stories like this with happy ever after.thanks jennie..keep on writing"

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On his watch

"I enjoyed this story"

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On his watch!

"So sweet & loving! A nice family they have together. Nice they are spending the time with their Children. Awwwh ❤🥰🐺😘"

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On His Watch

"Love this short story. Good read, nice plot and happy ending. So what's not to like? ❤️🌸❤️"

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On his watch

"What a wonderful story "

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Good

"Sweet and lovely story🌺 "

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Its good

"Its pretty good....thank you"

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On His Watch

"Very good start to what could be a much longer book! If I were you, I would take this and expand on it. You have a good story base and are talented. Don't be afraid to really let your imagination go wild and have fun telling about their lives together! Did her other grandfather ever accept her? Did she have a relationship with him? What about Cassan? Does he ever find his mate? Oh there are so many possibilities........ Good book. Really enjoyed reading it. Wish there was more to it."

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Ok for novel

"The grammatical errors were distracting. The story line has opportunities for more details as it skips around."

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