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Great👍👍

"I liked the plot of the story but it included more than enough twists for anyone who predicted what next incident could be.... But I enjoyed the story..😇👍👍"

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Harry Potter 24

"Loved it .... Interesting plot"

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Intruiging

"I really enjoyed this! It expands on betrayal and trickery. I loved how Bellatrix and Narcissa switched sides due to a change of heart, as did Draco. The plot was very interesting, like how Voldemort was able to possess Hermione. Great ideas! Continue writing!"

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Unknown reader

" I disliked the change of plot like heroine and Ron dying and ginny married to harry I liked Bella and narcissa changing "

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