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Luv can heal n destroy!

"It felt so real...the characters...the action or reactions...everything...in the end i hated the girl so much..i wished they should have punished her more🤷🏻‍♀️...but i guess their last together act washed away all the pain...n only luv remained❤❤.. Indeed a beautiful story ❤ 😍 "

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♥️♥️♥️

"Although it sounds syreal, still it felt really hot 😁😁😁"

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Worth the time

"Kept me coming back for more."

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Thanks for a great story! Definitely on the top 3 in this site for me.

"I wish I had half your skill at writing so I could express everything I want to into this review but sadly, I don't. So I'll just say thanks for such a good story. I worried at times, fearing a tragedy in the making, and though it might be unrealistic, I'm really happy with the ending. Thanks for sharing that parts of the story were based on real events too. It's something I do very often, fantasizing about that what if, making up countless endings in my mind. If only I could actually write :)"

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It’s so realistic!!

"I like the plot and writing. You feel the raw feeling of the characters. I know it’s a fantasy. But one thing life is short it’s up to us to enjoy it as long as we’re not hurting anyone. Thank you @dhonta it was entertaining and a lovely writing."

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Rule of Three

"I like the plot and it was a fast read and hot as hell. I would recommend it to my friends. I rated it like this because you didn't have to stop a rephrase the sentences to understand what the author was writing about."

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🥵🥵 is Right!!

"Loved the story line, so different. As a person who’s had her share of threesomes I love this!! I really enjoyed the last little bit of info at the end 😉 For prospective readers- I don’t think there were any grammatical errors, the plot was awesome, had a good ending, was a complete story (no cliffhanger or book 2, which for this is satisfying), and overall just great!! I love the authors open mind and the way the story is unfolded. Start to finish it held my attention. Thank you for this story and for sharing!!"

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Thrilling

"I have to start off by saying you had no flaws in your story, grammar wise not very much and story wise-none really. It was a great genuine story and after reading your author's note I understand how it's such a good story. It's a start of reality and borders into imagination and I love that. It's so creatively done and descriptive, but the story really matches the title 'Awkward Threesome'. It was awkward, the characters felt it, we readers can feel it and that's what I enjoy. Something that one can really, truly understand and feel, be a part of the characters journey and understand that things are never easy, especially when it comes to relationships and feelings. On your story, I liked the flow of it. It was decent length story, sure I would've loved more but I liked the way it went and ended, a nice simple cut off where we can picture all that is happening and the happy ending. I felt emotional with Zoe, Hunter and Malik and excited and enjoyed the sex and emotional parts between the three. To me, it wasn't just erotica it was real genuine romance and life to me. I'm really glad I read this and I'll probably read it again."

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Loved it!!!!

"Great story! Lots of detail. Cool that some of it was based on real life events. Nothing wrong with making the rest of it a fantasy. I hope they both, where ever they are, get a chance to read this....lol."

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Awkward Threesome

"Amazing. Really enjoyed this book"

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Awkward Threesome🥵🥵🥵

"I absolutely loved this book. I took way too long to read it but every time I sat down to do so I'd binge like a 1/3 of the book at a time. 😅 My only complaint is I wish it was longer, and neverending. 🤣 I started tearing up at the final chapter. It's so beautiful and not your typical romance, which I love! It's what drew me to the book. The ending made me emotional and long for more but once I read the authors note I understood why it ends this way. The author's note was touching as well, even the unfortunate realistic parts, but what can I say? That's life. 😩 Thank you for sharing your story and book with us. I was truly blown away with the way you write. Your talent the way you depict your scenes, every little detail was so realistic and poetic. Relatable, as read as breathing. And the emotion for each character was so eloquently descriptive. This book deserves so much more more attention! Well done, Dhondta. ❤"

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Great story!

"Love how sincere & loyal the 2 guys to the protagonist. "

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My BOYS, My life

"Dhondta, this was my first threesome book. I am glad I choose your book, I always thought these kind of things were just so not right like there will be jealousy, fights, issues. Yes the book did have it but also you really expressed the love they three did have for each other to just break all the boundaries, and also the bestfriend bond they both shared was amazing, I have gone through a faze in my life where my bestfriend had betrayed me and it was great to see that there are such people who can sacrifice or just know to do anything for there bestfriend. And the pure love, understanding they three had made me Grin. and so yeah so it is forever and that sounds weird but I liked the thought of it. Amazing book and love u its just super amazing to read such. definitely going in my secret collection. And yeah I love your book so much I read it in a day it self just couldn't stop reading it. Great work 😉😉😉😜"

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🌟 Just, WOW!! 🌟

"💜 Absolutely loved it, got lost in it while reading it!! Was Not Predictable, Loved the Unknown and the Feelings of Reality while Reading 📚 I even gasped a couple times! I was amused when came accross certain words that are not typical these days 😉 Glad for the way it ended too 💙 Great Book 😁"

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Love this

"Great story line"

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Awkward Threesome is AWESOME

"The story ain't done yet, but I love where you going with it, girl. And it's been an emotional roller coaster so far. It's fun, true, but I also feel seriously connected to the characters. I like how you write about their inner turmoil. Now, give us more soon, kk?"

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So much fun!

"What a fun read! Very well written and just the right amount of spice. The story flowed beautifully with well constructed dialogue that made it easy to read. Well done author!"

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My boys

"Great book!!!"

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Akward Threesome

"Well well, it was intense I felt like I was in her shoes, damn girl what a situationship.... How do you go around that. Like damn she likes double packs."

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"A very very very very very very very very interesting romantic exciting story to to read and enjoy.."

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