What is your opinion?
The book is great
"The beginning of the book is great. This book screams 'HORROR'. Simply I loved the whole scenario. The plot was great. Murdered, Best friend problems and so on. Every person who loves horror should read this book. Highly recommended for hour lovers. Overall ; Perfect horror story -Sanu-"
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"Wow!! The plot is very nice and I like your writing style.. Waiting for more of your novels.. Thank You!"
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"Nice story. I hope in future she won't get betray by someone.cuz I got betrayed 2 time and it hurts alot Author best of luck"
Good Work!!
"I actually liked the plot but the scenes could have been a bit more clear. Loved the story and the character of Cloe. Good luck for your future books. "
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"Your story is just amazing. Your ways with words are so impressive. I hope you will continue this story. And wish you best of luck for your future."
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"This book is a gem that, I am sure, will delight all readers once it's polished. Cloe is looking for something like we all do. She also doesn't want to feel pain anymore and seeks happiness. I suggest helping the reader understand who Cloe is and why she behaves in a certain way, explicitly mentioning the real matter at hand. Speaking of hand, you need to take mine as a reader and lead me in this story, describing me your world as if I was blind. (side note, kindly run your work through grammarly or another similar tool, it will work wonders.)"
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"The plot of the story seems interesting, but I encountered several problems that kept me from fully understanding and enjoying it. First of all, you currently have huge blocks of text with barely any paragraphs in the first 3 chapters. That got tiresome pretty quick. Furthermore, when different people speak, you should put their dialogue bits in different paragraphs. Right now, it's sometimes difficult to understand who is who at the beginning of your story. There are also quite a few grammar and punctuation mistakes, as well as typos, but a thorough edit and a good online editor could help solve those. The most important problem is that your descriptions are, to me, a bit flat. You should add a bit more "colour" so as to invoke deep emotions. As the story stands now (I'm in chapter 11), it reads like a list of events instead of making me feel something for the characters. But I understand that's totally subjective. Keep up the hard work!"
