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MONSTERVILLE

"One of the better books I have read in awhile. It is unfortunate that a sequel hasn't been written already."

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Beyond Expectation

"I would love to read the sequel of this book although I knew not to have my hope high, not a dull moment, just enough of everything to keep me going, I wouldn’t mind if the book is twice the length of the original tho, it’s just that good :)"

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Loved it

"I really loved the originality of this book and can't wait for the second one. "

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MonsterVille

"Just love the characters the writer chose to use , the comedy and suspense goes so perfect together not to mention the "naughtiness" 🤣 Overall 11/10"

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Monsterville

"Not what I was expecting but better. Very action packed with lots of twists.was a great read "

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MonsterVille

"Brilliant read! I powered through this because I couldn’t not reach the end! Great storyline! Hope there’s a second instalment! "

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MonsterVille

"Awesome! Very few grammatical errors, but they seemed more like typos. Excellent book. "

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What a Roller coaster!

"Some editing issues but not enough to distract from your story. Our River is quite the stud muffin, I loved the humor you weaves throughout your story. You were smart enough to know your reader would need some respite from the gore ( and we did) . You’ve got amazing skills since I dislike gore but could not stop reading! Congrats "

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A Hidden Gem I'm Glad I Found!

"To say the least this was an amazing book that kept the reader on its toes. I would love to see a sequal, but was happy with how the first ended. Maybe the next one could be River's kids and their lives, but getting a second book would be awesome!!"

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Monsterville

"It's a really good book, somehow difficult to keep up with but that's the writing style of the author and I think it's marvelous. I would recommend the book to fantasy lovers yet not, definitely not for people under 16 or so. "

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Monsterville

"Brilliant!! My need for carnage, humor, sex and emotional abuse have been fulfilled. Bless you for dragging me through this ordeal I didn’t know I needed."

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Kadero

"Loved this story. Very well written!!"

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Monsterville

"Really enjoyed this"

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Monsterville

"Huge Story!!! THANK YOU!!! I have rated alot of stories on Inkitt. I'm not going to give anything up about the story but the writing is very sophisticated, the length was enough to have new friends, whom I've thought about all week. I read this book slowly I rate it 6 plus stars!!!!!!!"

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Monsterville

"I really enjoyed this story, all the unexpected twists and turns this book offers are great. Would enjoy a sequal from monsterville"

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Dark, intriguing

"Irvine has a twisted sense of humor but it works. Not your average horror story, it keeps you gripped until the end. Looking forward to reading more of his work"

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Monsterville

"I very much enjoyed the humor and the unexpected friendships. I like the different monsters, although I would hope for more descriptions of them and the carnage they are capable of.( sorry, I am a glutton for punishment, and gore!). I did find it slightly sophmore-ish, but maybe that was meant for a teen audience?I found a few mistakes in spelling and puncuation,maybe typos?I sometimes like a simple read,tho, and found this a easy and enjoyable adventure."

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Amazing ride!

"Excellent storyline, plot, ending! A must read! Looking forward to what comes next!"

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