Living in Reality

carolin

0 chapters read

Cute romance

"Interesting story of wallflower boy gets the pretty girl. It was nice to read a story of a young woman having the confidence to ask for what she wanted, and boy did she ask. A gentle giant was the love of her life. Well done"

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Actual Living

"I love the story og Chance who is poor and trying his best.i also love stella they are a nice pair, this is one if the story ilove that even how poor a person is when they fall in love they are trying their best to show that love in a simple but honest way of enjoyment.I hate Chance parents unlike Jeffs parents oh what a pity good stella love him back an inspiration.ilove the story.its awesome."

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Easily A Re-read From Me.

"Not only was your writing style unique, it kept my attention--which is hard for books to do. I enjoyed your use of emotions, the tension between characters, and the overall improvement I got to witness throughout the read, for both you and your characters. This is one of those books I'll be back to re-read in a couple of months when I forget about the little things. Overall, an amazing job. While there's always room for improvement, I'd say you killed it, and to keep working hard towards whatever your goals are. Seriously. Thank you for the wonderful story. Sulli."

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Living in reality

"Incredibly amazing short story absolutely loved it❤❤❤❤"

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Destiny

27 chapters read

Good Story

"I disliked that Val wasn't in a relationship I would recommend this sorry to my family and friends I choose my rating bc it was a good story but it wasn't long enough "

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TopeLizbeth

13 chapters read

Living in Relity

"If you're a sucker for high school romance with all its intending drama, this story is for you. Although most times the lady is the awkward one, this story twisted things up a lil. I'm glad that despite everything thing happening at home, Chase did not allow it to turn him into a monster as some might have done, neither did he use his huge stature to oppress others as he could have done easily. I'm glad the girl he has crushed on since forever feels same way if not more and loves him. I'm thankful he has a good friend whose parents took him as theirs. As for these asshole parents, it's their loss. They can both die on their vomit although I wished the law caught up with them for what they did and their sorry asses are thrown in jail. Thanks for the lovely story. "

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