Sullivanderous

One To Be Remembered.

Three main points I want to focus on in this review, (I'll try to keep it short Ms. Anna)

Firstly, your writing style and unique use of diction was INCREDIBLE. Nothing like I've ever seen before, and I can happily say this is one of my favorite books on this site, it's one that I'll remember and return to, without a doubt in my mind.

Secondly, the tension and strife between your characters is a style to envy, and one I respect deeply. I applaud your simple use of conversational--or internal--conflict to draw attention to the little things, as well as keeping the larger issues at hand in your peripherals, non-forgotten.

Thirdly, while there is ALWAYS room for us authors to improve our work and skills overall, I'm impressed and inspired by the skill you've displayed. I know it's not easy to write, especially when you don't always have people to support you, but I can promise you've got at least one lifelong reader from here on out.

Thank you for the amazing story,
Sulli.

You Seriously Need To Read This Book.

Now, firstly, I'm a SUCKER for a good romance story, I think we all are, in one way or another.

However in my many years, and hundreds of romance books, I have NEVER seen a novel regarding cooking. That alone took ahold of my attention and held it strong until the end of the final chapter. I read this entire thing in one sitting, and make no mistake, it isn't a smaller novel or short story by any means--it was just that damn good.

I usually make it a habit to point out the style of writing, because I can usually find something entirely unique with every different author, but to be honest you didn't change or offer anything entirely brand new, no--you took something simplistic and made it wonderfully complex, and mixed it with a well thought-out and even more entertaining story, offering the readers a fresh and amusing story, with lovable and relatable characters. That's some AMAZING work from you, Ms. McKeown

Thirdly, I also like to remind that there is always room to improve. While grammar is something we all struggle with, you seem to have a decent grasp on editing your works--or not making the mistake in the first place, like a champion--though there is obviously always things you can work on. Adapting a unique style, finding your niche--if you haven't already--furthering your vocabulary and diction, finding new and better ways to set a scene. Not that you've done any of these wrong, just a reminder that we can always find something to better ourselves at, and some gentle encouragement to see you grow into an even BETTER author, because the community is selfish like that, wanting to see you grow and better yourself :D <3

Thank you for the wonderful, WONDERFUL read. To many more stories, and no writer's block!
Sulli.

One Of Those You Can't Stop Reading.

Wow, firstly, this book has a way with style that I can't even begin to describe. I'm usually a sucker for unique ways of writing, and seeing how different people's writing compares to others and my own, but yours is single-handedly in it's own lane--and I wish I was exaggerating when I say it blows other works out of the water with how easily you capture my attention and direct my views and interests between characters so damn well, it's seriously impressive.

I love a good under-novelists like myself, but I suspect with the right motivation, and a good outlook, you won't be that for very long. Keep writing, please, for both yourself and others who have a wonderful opportunity to read your works further. I cannot, I repeat, CANNOT wait for more of this story. It's wonderful on many levels, and I'm excited to continue the plot, and learn more about your unique and charming characters.

We always have areas to improve, grammar, diction, always-- and I always make that a key point in my reviews. So keep up with your hard work, learn from your mistakes, and thrive in this community, and many many others.

Thank you for the wonderful read, and here's to even more lovely chapters <3
Sulli.

An Interesting Read.

While I'm not usually one for Erotica/romance novels, I found that yours had caught my eye, and I figured I'd give it a read--well, up to where you currently are, obviously.

Firstly, you have a wonderfully smooth writing style that I enjoy reading, it's like water along sand, it absorbed everything and continues to float you along to the next cycle of thought.

Secondly, while there is always room to improve as an author, you're going into a hallway of greatness, nailing a--while undoubtly semi-generic troupe--and refreshing it with your own style, view, and ideals. It's quite amazing to see a dead horse being revived, and adding new and differing interests. Seriously, well done overall, Ms. Lane.

Thank you for the wonderful read thus far, and to many more chapters.
Sulli.

I'm Seriously Excited To Read More

I know you aren't quite finished, but I had several thoughts, and I figured now was a good a time as ever to state them.

Firstly--and least importantly--if you want to remove that white bar from the left side of your cover (assuming it isn't intentional) I recommend getting the Inkitt app, and re-uploading the cover from a mobile device, it fixes that white framing issue, without diminishing quality of the cover itself.

Secondly, I'm extremely impressed by your unique style with diction, and how you bend your words to make new and interesting ways to see a sentence, and the world you weave. So seriously, good job on that, it's not an easy feat to accomplish, and you make it look easy.

Thirdly, Claire is a wonderful character to see through the eyes of, and I'm very, VERY excited to see how the remainder of the story pans out, even more so that I get to see her through the eyes of a very talented writer, so do your best and focus, finish it through and you'll have a seriously amazing book in your hands.

Now, while there is ALWAYS room for us authors to improve our work, I'd say you're well on your way, you just need to keep going and actualize your goals. I hope to be there when you manage that.

Thank you for the wonderful read, and to many more chapters.
Sulli.

Easily A Re-read From Me.

Not only was your writing style unique, it kept my attention--which is hard for books to do. I enjoyed your use of emotions, the tension between characters, and the overall improvement I got to witness throughout the read, for both you and your characters.

This is one of those books I'll be back to re-read in a couple of months when I forget about the little things. Overall, an amazing job. While there's always room for improvement, I'd say you killed it, and to keep working hard towards whatever your goals are. Seriously.

Thank you for the wonderful story.
Sulli.