What is your opinion?
Amazing Plot!
"I really really like how the writers took each character seriously and the plot is just amazing. It is so so good I'm sure BTS fans would love this kind of work, though I really think some work can be put into the writing style, then it obviously differs from writer to writer. anyways I had a lovely time reading this!"
SMOKE ME!
"I enjoyed the seriousness of the story. I understand how skeptical it is to want to not trust anyone. They have something good, and even though they are weird together, it just seems fitting. I guess you cleared up the thought from the dialogue and that is alright I guess. I do want you to clarify the POVs a little more. Maybe it is just me, but it seems a little out of place at times. Having said so, your plot was well, and your characters need a little more room to grow, and it would be even better. I should mention how sorry I am for my late review. I have been taking some time off. This was a lovely story overall, and I really enjoyed it. Oh, and before I forget, LOVE THE TITLE!!!"
