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The Brother Four: rise of
"Looking forward to rrading the completed work"
Great start!
"I've only read the first three chapters, but what I have read has me hooked! What I like the most about it how the boys all come from completely different places, but still manage to come together. I also really like the symbolic-ness put behind the animals in the story. This plot reminds me of a video game RPG where you always want to know what's going to happen next. Aside from very few grammatical errors this is an amazing story and I think it can go really far!"
