First two chapters

"Great stuff so far! I like the idea of letters, and the narrator is fun to have as the main POV. I like the descriptions used and the narration is on point. I like the turning point with the two characters, too, especially since the end of the first chapter ended so harshly. I think the only area of critique I can think of is to read over and check for grammar mistakes (I did notice a few) but they aren't super distracting. Overall, this is really well done and I will keep reading!"