What is your opinion?
Interesting...
"I've really enjoyed reading this book so far. I think the world is exciting and new. My first reaction was that I'd never read something like this before. My favorite characters so far are Miguel and Raquel. I don't want to give spoilers but I was shocked when something happened to one of them. I'm thoroughly invested in seeing what's next. "
Review
"Love the story line in the beginning. I think it was a lovely novel. Nice work 👍"
What have you done to get this 5 star review?
"I loved it and I want more chapters to read. It was just an amazing world and characters that I could relate to and put myself in. Both scary and thrilling the story deserves more than the usual 4-star reviews that it has been getting."
Cats? Nice
"The plot seems very interesting and also filled with the potential to be a very good book. I like it so far with the different tribes and six connected lands worshiping a different deity. The author’s world building is good and isn’t too complicated where you wont understand. I would suggest working on spacing the paragraphs so they aren’t too long and blocky but other than that — I’ll be reading this book fully and following along with the Kingdom and the story. Great job author! "
A well built world
"The story was well plotted and the history of the world was fascinating to read. Good world building and characters. "
A Fascinating Story
"I find the plot to be captivating and enjoy the lore created by the author. The only thing I would change is the formatting. For example, I think more spacing between paragraphs would help. If you need help with this, I would be willing to help you. "
What Have I Done
"Overall the story is really interesting. Spelling and grammar are A+, but it took a lot to get through it. I would recommend highly that you break the story into paragraphs and make the dialog stand out. Great work!"
