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AMAZING !!!

"WHERE CAN I FIND THE NEXT PART !!! I NEED ITTTT "

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Love

"I stumbled across these amazing books first in Wattpad and followed the author over here! I was looking for a good book to read and found my first in the horror section it was "family comes first". Loved it and I was so happy to see there is lots more to read! Thank you for your amazing stories!"

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Amazing

"This is Ana amazing book first read it at wattpad but is amazing"

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Love it

"Please can you do another book to this I’m in loving it. I didn’t want It to end xx"

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Her New Family

"I enjoyed it. Kept me guessing the whole time 💜 Thx for the story, author 💜"

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LIVING IN THE MOUNTAINS

"The storyline was fascinating, suspenseful and exciting! It started out being about couple young spoiled selfish young teenage girls…quickly changed into a suspense horror storyline! I love the way it ended up with Izzy and Kyle happily married and expecting a baby. It was a few misspelling in the book…other then that I loved it!😜❤️ I would definitely recommend this book for my friends to read!!!💯 That’s why I rated this book five stars!⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️"

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Amazing

"I am in love with ur stories..jst complete this book in few hours.."

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A very interesting story!

"I ain’t gonna lie I was grossed out but this story is really good it had me so interested in it that I couldn’t stop reading. I felt sad for MC she had such a sad life so…I get why she stopped fighting it and just wanted to be loved and have a family. "

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Her new family

"More of this story please and see how it ends thanks keep up the good work 🤗🤗"

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Woooooooow just wooooow

"Omg I would definitely recommend this book, if you want a chill through your body this it definitely the book to read. I literally started reading this book and now I'm finished.. that's how good it actually was and I'm thinking even a second book could be made you did a great job and I loved it 😍😍😍😍😍😍possibly a great movie in the making lol ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️"

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Her new family

"Very unique story well written and believable story thank you!!"

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Her New Family

"Great book. A few small word errors but all together an enjoyable book whilst having a unique plot."

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Sick

"Sick book don't like it"

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Family first

"Spelling is bad. Having a hard time getting into the plot. Kinda boring and I just know how it goes "

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I feel bad for her at the first part I'm excited to see what happens next

"I love how you update almost daily. I enjoy coming home from school and you have a new chapter up! *claps*"

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The first parts are amazing please keep going 🙏

"It's amazing so far!!"

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Her new Family

"This story is good I was telling my Husband about it and he said it sounded like it would make for a good movie. Good job and Thank You "

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Like

"Liking it more"

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Her New Family

"Sincerely, I don't know how I feel about this. Coming from a place where she never mattered to anyone, it's easy to understand why she accepted her fate and stayed with them. Though she wanted a child that would be loved and cared for, she should have asked herself how she will feel if her kids are licking the blood of people and other weird things they did. I was hoping they would be caught and arrested so she could be free but, it is what it is"

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My new home

"I dislike the killings "

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