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Avid Reader

"OMG this was such a good story! I couldn't stop reading! A few punctuation and grammar errors, but I so enjoyed this story! Good job, author!!"

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Amazing

"This book was phenomenal. You have to read it ❤️"

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The Other Wife

"In my opinion this is an horror story about kidnapping, rape etc. I’m so glad it had a better ending. Sad part is this actually happens in real life. Even after saying all of this, I still recommend this story. Just be ready for some horrible things to happen."

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Other wife

"This book was a great read it broke my heart. And I was proud and encouraging her to get out that night. Thanks for writing this great book"

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Incredible Plot

"I adore the plot, the overarching theme, and the narrative flow of the story. It imparts a valuable lesson that, in the face of significant adversity, we should cultivate the resilience to persevere, maintaining the willpower to fight and liberate ourselves from whatever holds us captive. Discovered this author's work after reading "Chained Wife.""

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The Other Wife

"I absolutely love this story! I really can’t stop reading once I started reading. It is sooo recommended for inkitt readers! "

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Becoming the other wife

"Glad the ending was exactly how I imagined it. I’ll definitely recommend this book to my fellow book lovers. Great work.😊"

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Interesting plot

"It is a very interesting plot full of aggression, but the writer described the characters' traits very accurately. I felt that I was seeing every scene, and reading about the inner thoughts of the main character made me sympathize with her all the time.i liked her resilience and compassion and how she was able to love and care for the boys of her abductors. She loved her birds and felt bad for her bird even while being kidnapped. I recommend this book to readers. "

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Second wife

"This is a captivating novel."

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Becoming the Other Wife

"That was intense! I don't think I've ever read anything quite like it. After some editing I believe you have a winner🌹"

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Cheeses.H.Cripes!!!

"Whatta Great Story!! The plot was intriguing, and the characters were entertaining! Even Joy and her conniving schemes made my jaw drop numerous times!! Lol, I Loved It!!! My only issue was the grammer, and lack of punctuations. (Also, on Pg194 the boys are saying Miss Emma instead of Zoey.. AND it's "he's" not his.. that confused me for the first while) Otherwise, I had no issues understanding it, and I was enthralled right until the end!! "

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Becoming the other wife

"Hmm mm... Really i don't know what to say... It's the first book of this kind that I read.... I think it's a great book... It takes a lot to not break in that kind of situation.....speaks about the courage, love, and mercy... Really I liked it.... Great work... All the love💕💕💕💕"

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Becoming the other wife

"Wow! Good job . I’m speechless. I’m not much of a mystery genre but I loved this book. Kudos"

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Becoming the other wife

"Totally enjoyed this book from beginning to end. Well written with great plot. Strong female character that will inspire you"

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Becoming the other wife

"I liked it a lot it kept me reading."

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Crazy story

"This is a crazy scary story. Incredible storyline but definitely not for anyone with sexual abuse trauma history. Strong female lead character in Zoey. Love the twins POV! Happy for Burrito & Faith."

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Awesome story

"Over all I love the story and how the writer played all the events , there’s few misspelled and very few grammatical errors but all in all I love the story ! "

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Becoming the other wife

"It was a very good story, hooks you in straight from the beginning, how the plot unfolds is quite thrilling as it leaves you waiting for more. Amazing plot, throughout its darkest moments there’s still that shred of hope that keeps you going. And best of all, it is tied up with a great and satisfying ending, completely realistic and a strong, smart protagonist as we see morals being questioned and her being subjected through it all. Amazing and unique story! Note: thank you very much author for all the updates even if you still had thongs going through your daily life and I was completely enthralled by your story!"

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Not for the faint of heart

"This isn't a sweet book, this isn't the beauty falling for the beast. This is a survivor story and about the strength of someone's mind. A good read and loved the ending. With some editing to fix some spelling, misplaced words and grammatical errors, I would definitely give a higher rating. But if you can get past that, the story is well worth a read. "

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Interesting and different story

"This story is very interesting and amazing. I love unpredictable stories and this was one of them. I love Zoey's spirit and strength. I want to thank the author for updating the story regularly. I just loved this story."

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