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A love story

"I liked everything "

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When you Smile

"I enjoyed this short story, I read it in two minutes because, it's too short. And I can't stop thinking about what will happen next.Lol🤣(Because I also want something like this🤭🤫) never mind. Thank you author for this book, and wish you best of luck for your all works. ❤️"

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Good start for first book!

"It’s a short love story between two strangers who meet by fate. It’s short, sweet and simple. ❤️🦋💘💘 As it’s authors first book there are few errors which can easily be fixed- 1. There are lot of changes in tenses. At times I was getting confused if it’s all happening in present or past. 2. I wish there were little more details and maybe drama. It was just too simple for me. But I wish all the best for your future writing. ❤️🐥"

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