Hallowed

"There are only four chapters posted but you've got a very strong opening, which is always a fantastic start, and of course, well begun is half done. Hallow, is a very strong woman who is not afraid to stand up for herself and I love that. You're clearly building a fantasy world full of interesting creatures and species, as they keep on referring to Hallow as a human. I like how you're gradually adding to this world so the reader can find out a bit at a time, and they're not overwhelmed with information. Keep up the great work! Sofia."