Short and Sweet

"This story is so short that it only took me about five minutes to read, but I don't think it needs any more, it's perfect as it is. Tom is a wonderfully developed character, he has his rage and jealousy towards his girlfriend which leaps off the page because it's so well portrayed. What I find most interesting though s right at the end, Tom has a dream that he's killed his girlfriend and when we wakes up he hasn't given her the tablets and she isn't dead but lying peacefully next to him fast asleep. It's like there are two realities, it's really good! Keep up the fantastic work! Sofia"