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Please add more into the story

"It may be short on chapters for right now, It does have potential and the grammar and Punctuation is good as well the story's prose. I would like to continue reading the story, just add more chapters. Don't forget to remove the whitespace."

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PATIENT #00647

"Great read so far"

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PATIENT #00647

"I am so delighted to be the first to write a review on 'Patient #00647 I love the story, the way it started, and the gradual and progressive build-up. And what the storyline entails just makes the content most wanted. I see your effort to make the book grammar and content friendly. Please continue in this direction. Good work! I can't really say more but honestly, I am loving the story already, finish up Brooks."

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