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"An adorable love story between a town girl and a carny boy. Well written and very enjoyable to read. I really hope you write a sequel for this couple…"

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Dreamy

"Loved how this short story felt longer! Really nice lovestory"

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Could be a little more realistic...

"I really like the concept about waiting for the first time...but irl nobody really waits for someone for that many years. Overall the steamy scene was well written! 🔥🔥❤️ And I kinda wish he stopped treating her like a little girl when she was 19 cauz it feels creepy later when he has sex with her....😶"

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Worth a reread

"That was a short story that really hit the spot. Like a late night and necessary snack. I really enjoyed it!"

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"In my opinion this was wonderful short story. It was very well written. And I love the characters. This is a great book for those coming of age. And for all of us remember coming of age. 😊😊"

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Soooo cute and sweet story 🥰👍

"Really loving your writing skills Author. Although short story but it never failed to deliver the sweetness oin the story, the tender love and innocence they reflect....wow, loved it... keep going Author.... Greedy for more👍🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰"

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Admission of one

"Love this beautiful love story. Keep it up."

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"I liked the story a lot it had some spelling mistakes but it’s fine for me "

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Great short story

"You are quickly becoming one of my favorite writers! "

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loving this

"this is sooooo sweet! everything run smoothly as a good story. simple yet fulfilling. good work, author. 💕💕💕"

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"Super cute short story. ❤🧡💛💚💙💜🖤"

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Short and sweet

"Loved it. Hate that so many in her life turned out to be idiots but everything ended up good for in the end 🥰"

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"Well damn! That was a really lovely short story. A proper feel good, smiling type of story. I absolutely loved it "

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SUPER CUTE

"A sweet, short story. I loved the characters and the setting is so original! It’s very well written too. Perfect if you need a quick fix of feel-good. ♥️"

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Cute story!

"I really enjoyed this story! Would love to read more of their adventures together!!!! "

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Cute!

"I loved your book. It was so cute how he waited for her all these years and how she waited for him. See when I say I want to read *soft* romance books (yk without the enemies to lovers trope) this is what I'm talking about."

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"I absolutely love this book, the overall writing style is easy to follow and the romance is adorable... However, to improve I think the author could go into a little more detail about the characters as well as Adies' life overall. It's a bit fast pace for me, but, 10/10 recommended if you're looking for a short sweet love story to binge read xx "

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