Interesting but...

"Well, your book was off to a very good start. First off, I would urge you to indicate when changing scenes, or you could put them into different sections. Your chapters are very long, and it gets confusing at times. Your character's need a little more room to grow and there is much to work with and go along. I loved the way it started off even though I thought I was at chapter four when I was only at chapter one! LOL. I don't think I noticed any punctuation or grammar errors, or I may have overlooked them. I do however, noticed your dialogues require a bit of work. Just need to tighten it a little. I think your chapters requires a cliffhanger of some sort to urge your readers to attract wanting to read more into the book. Your plot is slow paced and not rushed at all, and you explained well detailed settings. I admire that a lot. I will be looking into the other books soon but for now this was an amazing read and I think what you should do is individually give these book recognitions. As for the review group, I think you should expose more of the books with review swap and politely ask if they could read it and give you the feedback that you need. You write wonderfully and it needs to be recognised. Keep up the great work. I love this!"