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What is your opinion?
Excellent!
"I enjoyed the story, I found the intro was great, it really hooked me. Just a couple things, 1. There is just a couple errors here or there, with punctuation and spelling and whatnot. 2. Some sentences are really long and wordy, while the message might be better delivered in a few shorter, simpler sentences, or you can put commas in natural breaks in the sentence, this improves the flow and structure of a sentence. Overall, really good! I can't wait to read more."
Short report
"I enjoyed the story, it is clearly going places. You seem to know what you are talking about (the description of bleeding out symptoms is exact) and I cannot wait to continue reading more of your work."
