5 chapters read
Emerald Luna
"Loved this book. I wished we could have had a heart to heart conversation with both sets of her parents. "
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27 chapters read
Good Read
"This was a good read with a nice plot and characters. I would have liked more of a storyline with the necklace. Her parents sent her away, and her main enemy was an ex she had before the necklace came into play. Seems like they could have raised her all along..."
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27 chapters read
Emerald Luna
"This was really a wonderful story to read and I so enjoyed it."
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27 chapters read
Emerald Luna
"It was great to read this book, i thought it would bring drama, in a way it did lol but not the dramatic as i would have liked it... but overall love it!!"
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27 chapters read
Emerald Luna
"Good book 🤗"
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23 chapters read
Cute story
"This was a cute story "
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22 chapters read
Emarald luna
"Beautiful story,easy reading.Nice to be feeling good afterwards "
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27 chapters read
Emerald Luna
"That was an amazing story I loved it to the end"
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26 chapters read
Emerald luna
"Absolutely incredible story absolutely loved it ❤ "
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27 chapters read
the emerald luna
"i absolutely loved this book. the characters were great.. i loved the Luna and her growth this book was great and i would love to read more stories from this author."
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18 chapters read
Emerald Luna
"Love this book"
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21 chapters read
Good story
"I would recommend this book to friends and family "
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6 chapters read
Emerald Luna
"Very interesting story line."
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25 chapters read
Nice Read
"The plot of this story needed a little more development. Since the necklace is a major part of the story. it would have been nice to have more of the story focus on that. The characters were fine. There are some confusing parts in the book and pieces that dont make sense to me. Otherwise it is a decent read. Other"
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26 chapters read
Story
"This was very good read not too confusing like others I have read"
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26 chapters read
Esme❤️
"Very cute story!"
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27 chapters read
Emerald Luna
"It is a lovely and imaginative story. "
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27 chapters read
Not Bad but Definitely A Younger/Inexperienced Writer
"The story itself is a good story with decent amounts of thought/imagination involved. The way it’s written is more of a rough draft type writing style as opposed to be the final project style. More development of characters and individual personalities would be so much better. Just seems like a newer writer but with such good potential. Gotta do more proofing though because so many words are left out of the sentences and so many errors or autocorrected inaccuracies are everywhere. That’s what made the reading turn daunting. "
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Emerald Luna
"Nice and lovely story. "
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