Chapter Where it all began | Where It All Began by Owlie at Inkitt
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Where it all began

Summary

It is about this 16 year old girl named Riley trying to save her sister amity for belo but instead finds a guy who is named hunter

Genre
Horror/Fantasy
Author
Owlie
Status
Ongoing
Chapters
1
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
13+

Where it all began

**puffs* "im here" Riley said while catching her breathe *she swung the door open and was staring and a silhouette "W-Whos there.."? She said trembling with fear *a man appears in front of her and grabs her by the arm* "come uncle wants too see you now that you have arrive"said the man with a calm voice (it didn't relax her) ...*while walking she saw pictures and people who didn't look friendly at all she wasn't happy at all* "let me go"!she shouted in a firm voice while tugging his selve*the man stops and starts to stare at her then continues to drag her* Riley's mind:this man is insane! And his uncle!? I know who is but come on now! I'm just trying to get my sister.*they got to the mean guy*..."i-i just want my sister back! Don't you see your being quite stupid"! Riley said with a loud voice

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"I see you have arrived Riley is it? Of course it is! You want poor poor amity? Come get her"~ he said with a devilish voice *which ticked Riley off a bit too hard she pushes the man out the way and yelled* GIMME HER NOW! ...*the room went silent she started to get worried she looked at the man with a worried look*

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"I just want her..cage me instead! You want me! Not her..I WILL GET YOU THE OWL LADY"! Riley screamed with a begging voice *the golden guard stood there and said* uncle this is a good deal think about it I will put the prisoner in my room *I looked at the man and smiled but then realised I was still gonna be here

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