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A Very Interesting Dark Romance

"The plot is very interesting and I like that there's more depth to the male lead. Unlike a previous story you posted where we had very little understanding of why he acted so cruel. With this story you can understand his reasoning for his actions, not that they are condoned of course. And it seems that there is possibility of him to growing and redeeming himself. Great job your work is always very intriguing and goes to dark places of reality where most are uncomfortable to venture. Can't wait to read more!"

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NOPE

"I did not like this. The male protagonist was abusive emotionally, physically and sexually. I like to think we've evolved as a society where that isn't considered love. Nora's only characteristic is that she's been abused, that's not a character trait. Her 'saving' from Erik didn't even make sense. There is no, absolutely no world in which they will end up together. It's disgusting. And also, he first saw her when she was ten, again eww. As for Claudia,I feel so bad for her. She deserved better. And I hate his mother and 'the Collins'. They're all terrible, if you want to create anti hearoes, at least give them motive, intentions, backstories. Don't just make them flat."

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