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I liked it

The writing, suspense and mystery was good.

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Good

The writing was phenomenal, the syntaxes were good, the characters weren't one dimensional.
There's nothing wrong with the book, it's good. The thing is, that's it. There's nothing memorable about it. The plot is predictable, there are no surprises and it's easily forgettable. The author is so good, her writing is also good, she can do so much better.

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NOPE

I did not like this. The male protagonist was abusive emotionally, physically and sexually. I like to think we've evolved as a society where that isn't considered love. Nora's only characteristic is that she's been abused, that's not a character trait. Her 'saving' from Erik didn't even make sense. There is no, absolutely no world in which they will end up together. It's disgusting. And also, he first saw her when she was ten, again eww. As for Claudia,I feel so bad for her. She deserved better. And I hate his mother and 'the Collins'. They're all terrible, if you want to create anti hearoes, at least give them motive, intentions, backstories. Don't just make them flat.

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I liked it

The plot is fresh. Very entertaining. The protagonist is a fighter, that's an admirable trait.

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