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Great Job
"This is a story that absorbed me right away, with an intriguing, well-developed plot. The author's voice was evident and strong throughout all seven chapters. So many twists made the story not only interesting but captivating. A must read!"
Well Done.
"This kept me intrigued, I only intended on reading 1 chapter but couldn't stop until I'd read the whole thing. The only let-down were a few spelling mistakes hence the 3 stars but otherwise a great read."
Well Done!
"This was thoroughly intriguing the entire time. I could not stop reading and the ending was beautiful. My favorite part was when he created the so called monster. Your choice of words created the perfect vision. Good Job!"
