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Goosebumps

"This story will stick with me because I don't completely understand it, but it leaves a feeling - like an itch you can't quite scratch. The fact that it's so short just heightens the effect - the reader can hold the whole story in their head to be pondered over and over, like a Zen koan. I have a couple of ideas as to what's 'really going on' in the story, but I'll just keep them to myself and continue thinking about it. Great piece!"

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Exactly what I was looking for!

"It is pretty short, and there is not much of a plot or any characterization to be found, but it's just the kind of writing Inkitt needs more of. It's original in its premise and leaves a lot of room for interpretation. It's concise and clear in its imagery, and I particularly love the sense of unrestrained imagination I get out of it. And I would recommend it to readers who want to read something different."

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A Lightbulb's Life

"Needs more. The suspense was there but the ending felt off."

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