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The beast beneath

"I want to know what happens next with Karina, does she get to find out about the prophecy about her? What about the boy that she met when she was younger? I like it so far and want more please."

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The beast beneath

"Interesting first chapter "

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Awesomesauce!

"Very good storyline ! The author keeps you interested, even though there are a few grammatical errors, I think it's an awesome book! Keep up the good work!👏 "

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good

"i like it "

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The beast beneath

"Wow!! That was great!! Thank you for sharing your story with me "

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Need more!

"I'm loving this story and need to read more!!"

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THE BEAST BENEATH

"Dang! This book is one hell of a book. The characters, the descriptions the settings. I love it all. Lunar did an amazing job. It’s hard to believe this is your first book. It’s just too good. Can't wait for more chapters🩷💕"

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The Beast Beneath

"I am sorry but this storyline does not have enough chapters to warrant my understanding or my patience with this story "

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Absolutely love the beast beneath

"This book is just perfect for me Not alot of werewolf books are unique with their plots nowadays, so it's refreshing to see a good strory"

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I just started this book today and I've already fallen in love

"I'm in love with the way the book is going so far and I'm already hooked. I love all the characters in their own story arcs but I want to see where all of this goes if they meet up again and fight whoever Aria is looking for. The book's Grammer and structuring could use a bit of work, but overall I'd recommend this book to any of my friends😘 Keep up the good work😁🤝🏼😌"

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I like the story so far, and though there could be some editing done 😅 I love all the characters. I'd like to hear more about robin and quintanna though. I'll definitely recommend this book to people who'd like this type of book💪😌

"I chose this rating cause I feel there could be improvement with transitions to different parts of the story as well as editing for the grammar and punctuation. But overall, I love the plot and can't wait to read more from you😊 Keep up the good work @lu 🤝🏼"

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Don't remember the title

"I am enjoying the book. I don't dislike anything. I would recommend the book to anyone that reads the type of books I do. My rating is all 5 stars because I'm really enjoying the book. If a story can keep me as interested as this one does then it gets all 5 stars."

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Good plot

"Good plot development, feeding info a little at a time to keep us wanting more."

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The beast beneath

"Good story, a bit all over the place in some parts but I think you have potential to be a good writer. So far I am enjoying the story"

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Ahh!

"I'm on the edge of my seat waiting to see what happens next!"

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This pops up too early

"Not read enough yet"

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The beast beneath

"This book is like all the others. Get you involved in the story. Then nothing "

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