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Author Chasity Nicole

"I know when this story was written some of the facts are based on a place we lived. It was a dark place no sunlight really very depressing. We are in a better place now full of light but it gave a base to this great story. Very scary and dark that's this story makes it truly one of the darkest places on Earth."

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The Dark Specter from the Devil''s Playground

"First off, I really love the title. It makes a person want to open it up and jump right in. There were a few story logic issues, here and there, and only a few minor grammar things, but they did no take away from the flow of the story. It was a really quick read, right up to where the family safely packed up and moved away from the haunted property. I had a few character issues with the young narrator. When does a fourteen year old say to her mother, I need to get over my anthropophobia? .And, if she is this intelligent, why doesn't she display it in future dialogue? She also uses the word cryptic within the narrative. It is suppose to be from a fourteen year old's perspective, not the age of the writer.. I would also ask the author to dig deeper into research. She refers to witches as pagan witches. All witches are pagans. All in all a fun little story that even a child would enjoy. I recommend reading it."

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