What is your opinion?
Wow
"I love this authors writing style and the plot of this story. It hooks you from the very beginning and makes you want to keep reading to the very end well done!"
Review
"I love how fast paced the story is, holds your attention firmly to the end. "
I love, love, love it!
"I loved this book. It's about six chapters in but I was hooked from the first one. The plot is really interesting and it leaves you with a ton of questions and just grabs your attention. Keep up the good work, I'll stay tuned for more XDDD"
The Fairy in the Birch by Y.F. Bloomfield
"I was gripped, from the dream sequences - the recurring dream sequences that get darker and darker as the tale progresses - to the real life sequences. I found the growing tension, the ominous dark, the man, calling, calling for you - the tension build as the danger flashed in and out of your mind - and the effects, compelling. Contrast that with your "normal day at school and home" real life moments which were so easy to read and accessible. And you have a gripping, intriguing read. Minor detail: be careful to stay in present tense, otherwise well-plotted and neatly executed. I really enjoyed reading you. HJ."
Very Intriguing!
"This story is really good so far and well written. It’s very detailed and has a good plot to it so far. The beginning of it was honestly mind blowing, and worded perfectly to the tea! Great job so far! "
Beautiful
"This story is beautiful. I read a lot of romance novels but this one is something entirely its own. I'm not generally a selfish person but you can believe me when I say MORE!!!!!!!! I would be so happy if you choose to bring this book further. And if you work hard you'll definitely get approved. PS: HOW ARE YOU NEW AT WRITING?!?!?!"
I want more!
"There is something deep creeping in her dreams, and now it may very well creep into mine too! Hellish Farrow! The author has style! We get to live some EDM magic across the character, and I love this! This story is worth a good publishing. The plot is slow-built and profound, like the dreams of its character, and unfolds in a universe of pain and internal conflict. It speaks to me. I believe it speaks to all of us. The character has spirit. Yet, we feel this fragile humanity in her between every line as the plot unfolds. I can't wait for the following chapters. Well done!"
Fun dark read can’t wait for more
"The main characters pain and loneliness comes across throughout the chapters."
The Fairy In The Birch
"I think this is a romance with a lot of potentials. The overall plot and world are interesting, but the characters seem a little bland and archetypal. With a little development, they could be much more realistic. You should also use a more poetic hand with your descriptions. Overall though, I think you have a solid story here, and, with a little bit of polishing, something great! Good luck!"
