Their Undying Love by Reader817 at Inkitt
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Their Undying Love

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Summary

Vrutika Singhaniya, sarcastic, talented and kind are words used to describe her. The top student, beautiful inside out and living her life to the fullest, until she met him... Luciano Moretti, disguised as Aakanksh Alessi, is player; smart and rich. He has all which one could kill for- looks, brains, guts and wealth. But both of their unsolved and unknown secrets in life leads to life threatening problems and difficult circumstances. But what happens when breaking their bonds lead to the Italian Mafia finding its heir? Heya all, This is my first time writing a story so please ignore some cliches.. It will happen and also grammatical errors. Constructive criticism is always welcome but rude and cursed words are not. Beware, This story contains mature language and violence. Read only if you can handle. Enjoy!! Love ya all.. 💗

Status
Ongoing
Chapters
6
Rating
4.0 1 review
Age Rating
16+

Chapter 1

One was Fire, Other was Ice,

One was Sweet, Other was spice,

They were half but perfect in their own way

And so different, empty, aloof and all you could say.

One talked to feel light,
One listen to be bright;
One stayed so the demons calm down,
Other stayed so that the demons calm him down.


She was feisty, daring and optimistic
He was cold, confident and collected.

She was the one
Who melted him,
And he was the one
Who cooled her.

So, together, the Fire and the Ice started their journey
Along a very long path,
And still they are figuring out the up's and down's of each other
To get each other out of their bloodbath.

The Bloodbath they created,
Of stubbornness and determination-
Of trust, hurt, peace, desire and hatred,
Of their amalgamation.


I closed the book after I finished writing the poem, it is my soothing therapy, actually anything that distracts my mind and makes me happy is my soothing therapy.


So, starting with formally introducing myself, I am Vrutika Singhaniya, a happy-go-lucky 18 year old girl who is studying in Harvard university. I, basically am from India, Gujarat more specifically but because of my good marks I got scholarship and ended up here. I am the single child of my parent. And yeah, I am not the nerd-who-never-lives-her-life girl. I am I love talking, singing and dancing and even-


"Boooo" Exclaims Sophia. "God, you scared the shit out of me." I replied while trying to steady my dear heart who has been overwhelmed from the sudden appearance of this girl.


"Actually, I was planning to give a big heart attack so that I can have all of your chocolates, bitch you don't share even one of it with me." Sasses and then whines this girl.


"Sister, you can ask me to share my boyfriend and I will do it in a heartbeat, but food and then chocolates, sorry, dear, even after my demise I will come and haunt you if you ate them." I replied.


I looooveeee Chocolates. More than I can love my life partner.


"I would have asked you to share your boyfriend if a) You had one b) Your choices wouldn't be sooo, idk, good boys and c) There has to be a boy who has done the great deed to let me talk to him." Retorted Sophia.


"But weren't you planning on becoming a lesbian?" I asked with a smirk, knowing she will remember the last time she got drunk and made a damn whining programme of wishing to be a lesbian, which when she woke up, gave her a lot of attention.


"Nia, I swear to hell that if you remind me that again-"
"Heya, cagnas (bitches)" Greeted Mary as she came walking towards us.
And yes, those who are thinking that why soph called me nia, it is because of my surname because neither me nor her can find any nickname from my first name.


I wonder if everyone who have long and boring names get their nicknames from their surnames.


"Ciao Mary" Answered by us as she reached us. "Whatcha doing?" She directed her question at me. "Just writing, as usual." I replied and then hold my book for them to see.


"You know, sometimes I think that you should stop this science shit and start writing a poem" Said Soph as both she Mary had read and analysed my poem.
"Yeah, become a poet, but then your boyfriend will always be at the lack of words to describe the beauty of you and your poems." Told Mary.


"Guys, I have a question, why every discussion ends with you two talking about my love life when I don't even have a boyfriend." I questioned.


"Coz, it is out duty as your friends-turned-sisters to make you realise the importance of a relationship." Answered Soph. "And even the importance of experiencing a mind blowing, knees weakening, earth shattering orgasm and fuck of your life" Commented Mary, who of course was the most sex experienced in our trio.


"Ugh, I don't want to talk about it. So just.. I gotta go." I said and practically started running because of the topic, don't judge me, I like, hell, even love sex talk, but just hate when I am the topic, when I realised that the duo were catching me up I started running even faster until I bumped over a wall.


My nose, my nasal septum has been broken. I am going to need a surgery.







So this is the first chapter of the book, hope you like that.
Love you all... 💗💗
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