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At My Best

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Summary

Finding love after heartbreak and betrayal

Status
5yrs ago
Chapters
11
Rating
4.5 (2 reviews)
Age Rating
18+

Chapter 1

3rd Person POV


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"You deserve to suffer the way I have. I refuse to allow you to continue, making a fool of me. I told you when we first met, that I am no ones second choice, but like an idiot I stayed; hoping you would change. Not anymore." Kai says to Keone, as she packed the last of her things, while holding in her tears, the best she could.


"I promise I'll change, baby. I didn't mean for this to happen. I don't want anybody but you. You know I love you." He pleads, not knowing what else he could say or do, to make his soon to be ex girlfriend stay.


"Bullshit! You don't know what love is! Answer me this. Was it love that told you to cheat on me? Was it love that told you to get the girl pregnant? Was it love that made you fuck another bitch, while I was having a miscarriage, with your child?! Was it love that made you miss my mother's funeral? The same woman that you claim, was a mother to you. Huh! Was it?!" Sekai screams while, getting in Keone's face.


Keone couldn't say anything. He knew she was right. He knew this was the end for him, but his pride wouldn't allow him to admit he was wrong.


"You want Mariah. You love Mariah, cause if you didn't you wouldn't keep going back to her. You're a selfish piece of shit. You want your cake and eat it too. You want to come home to someone, after you've spent all day running the streets, and fucking any bitch that bats their lashes at you. Well, you can have em, and they can have you."


Grabbing her last suitcase, Sekai makes her way downstairs, pass his friends in the living room, who heard everything they said. She put it in the back of the Uhaul trailer, that was attached to her car.


"So, you really gonna throw our relationship away? You gonna leave me like everybody else? I knew you were just like, everybody else." Keone pathetically races after her. Trying to guilt her into staying.


Sekai couldn't believe she ever loved someone like him. Someone who didn't have any ambitions, any goals, any future. But, it didn't matter to her cause she was 'in love'. Fuck love. She finally saw him for who he was, and she didn't want any parts of it, anymore.


"Nigga fuck you! You really think I'm gonna stick around after you dogged me out! You are a fucking embarrassment! Maybe the reason people always leaving you, is because of shit like this! You can't expect someone be down for you, when you don't even know what loyalty is! You always talking to ya niggas about being loyal, but you couldn't even be loyal, to the one woman, that would've done anything for you! Then you have the nerve to go make a baby with a bitch, who didn't even care when niggas loaded you up with bullets!"


At this point, Sekai could see some of the neighbors peeping out their window, listening to them. She didn't need that.


She had too much going for herself. Sekai worked as a pediatrician, in the children's hospital, and she doesn't need these white people spreading her business around.


She met Keone at her job, when he brought his little brother in, cause he had pneumonia. She was caught off guard by how atttactive he was, and he was such a smooth talker. It stupidly made her look pass, all the red flags that were right in her face, but she was always the type to attracts 'bad boys'.


"You gonna come back, you always do. That's how we are. You can't live without me. You love me too much." Keone says, patronizing Sekai. Trying to show out in front of his boys. But, little does he know, they feel sorry for him. They knew how good of a woman Sekai was, but Keone was too full of himself.


"I used to love you. I haven't loved you in a long time, and that's why it's so easy for me to walk away. I'm done arguing with you, I'm done playing these childish games, and I'm done with you . You don't deserve me. You never have, and you never will."


With that, Sekai gets into her car, leaving Keone in the driveway.


"She'll be back. I don't care what she say, she need me."


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-What do y'all think of the first chapter so far? I literally thought of this story today, so hopefully it sound good.


-What do y'all think of Keone and Sekai?


-Do you think she'll come back?


-Please let me know in the comments and vote.

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A cool chapter....

5 years
author

hé is a pos and if she is going back she is the fool

4 years

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