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The Wolfpack book 1
"Really good story, I enjoyed it. Way too short though."
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The wolf pack
"Loved it wish there were more"
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love this
"I love this book it is so much better than any of mine and I havn't even finished my books. I think you should write more and if yo need any Ideas I will be glad to give you some."
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"A story with an interesting plot, but their are some changes that need to be done. So first of the summary of the story, I advice you don't add that google link of the cover and wattpad there. Its not necessary and it also makes you distracted. Second, the story is good but the paragraphs are quite long. I advice you make them shorter and separate the dialogue. This will help with the story structure and flow of the story. it will also make the reader more comfortable as long paragraphs tend to make readers tired. Small grammar mistakes and details that can be fixed if you edit it. I advice as well you read your chapters before uploading to check on the story flow. Overall is fine just those small things that can be fixed. Keep it up!"
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