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Letting go…

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Summary

Goodbye

Genre
Poetry
Author
Erin
Status
Complete
Chapters
1
Rating
5.0 1 review
Age Rating
13+

Letting go…

I wrap you in a hug,

Loving you, needing you, keeping you from harm.

I close my eyes and push back the tears.

I swallow and try to drown out my fears.

I breathe in your scent and I sigh,

I squeeze you a little tighter and inside, I die.

I press my lips together to drown out my cry.

But still you are leaving and I wonder why.

My heart becomes heavy, my body becomes weak,

I slowly let go and you begin to speak.

My brain stops turning, my heart skips a beat.

My tears they are falling, down to my feet.

Disbelief engulfs me, it swallows me whole,

I drop my hands to my sides with an ache in my soul.

As a sharp pain stabs through me, there is pain in your eyes,

Inside I am praying this is all just a lie.

You tell me you love me and this I should know,

But I look at you once last time…then I let you go.
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i like it this short poetry because it can relate to someone or a couple whom are going through roughly time and their but to breakup. also I relate because I’m going through similar things with someone I put time and effort to change but it failed

4 years

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