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Fresh

"I love reading this story, it is one of my favorites. The plot is nice and simple but with complex and energizing characters. I always appreciate a good psychopath story, but this one is my favorite. The development of Roman's mental illness felt real without being heavy or ruining the story, and Cora's naivety Was in perfect moderation. I would not only suggest this to everyone, but I would read it again. 💖"

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Love it

"I have read a few chapters and so far it has been a really fun experience, I like your writing style and how you speak about the characters, and the story definitely caught my attention I couldn't put it down until I had to. Great job! can't wait to keep reading :)"

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Merciless Fate

"This story is very well written and the characters are very believable. It captured me from the beginning to the end !!!The climax of the story was expected but with a very well thought out twist !!! And Alanah was able to capture the true nature of each character, making a tragically sad story a cautionary tale that breathed fresh air into a very toxic environment for those who survived it !!!"

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Poor Cora

"Wowzers I anticipated as much but I was so hopeful she would come out the other end kicking his butt. This was a great read. The author knows how to keep her readers wanting more, salivating is more like it. I would recommend reading this short story! I’d give it more stars if I could."

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