What is your opinion?
Wrath of the Flame The Devil’s Daughter
"At first I thought it was a little slow reading. The more I read the more interesting it got. I don’t feel that the plot was explained very well. All in all it was a good read."
Wrath of the flame the devil's daughter
"Loved the plot, great story can't wait to start the next follow on"
Great details
"First of all, the technical level of the story is good. Grammar is on point and the story is readable and understandable. You decided to let the readers know Piper’s origin from the very first chapter. This makes the story dynamic and intense from the very beginning. Although, the title itself reveals that information, so it would have maybe been a bit odd not mentioning it in the first chapter. You have chosen an interesting topic and provided a lot of details which fit the story perfectly and that shows that you have invested a lot of time in the story. I also get the sense that you’ve immensely enjoyed writing this. The style of writing is good, the tone adds to the suspense of the situation and the story is so intense that it makes the readers themselves feel the tension and want to read on and on to see what happens next. I think this story would be a great movie, if adapted."
