Damaged Beyond Repair by DivinationQueen at Inkitt
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Damaged Beyond Repair

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Summary

💔 She was weak. She was complacent.  They had broken her until she was nothing an obedient little doll. She had finally given up. She had accepted her fate. They had finally accomplished what they set had set out to do... They had all destroyed the little girl. They had finally WON!... or at least that was what she wanted them to think.. 🔞This story is for mature audiences only!! • This Story has major TRIGGERS • There will be RAPE. TORTURE .ABUSE, SELF HARM ****This will be an extremely heavy story and will deal with many heavy issues. Please be kind to yourself and do not read if you think it could be triggering. ** this is my very first time writing a book. I would love some CONSTRUCTIVE criticism 

Status
Ongoing
Chapters
5
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
18+

Where It All Began

It was a cold stormy night and the little girl heard yelling from her bedroom. It echoed down the hallway. Even though she knew she should stay inside her room where it was safe, her curiosity got the better of her.


Looking back oh how she wished she would have stayed in bed. Perhaps her life would have turned out differently... or perhaps nothing would have changed and they would have come for her anyways. It was too late now.


As she quietly crept down the long hallway she caught a glimpse of a few words.


Marcus:

" Don't you fucking touch her !" "Nothing you do will change my mind. I refuse to give you what you want."

“The Empire is all mine brother. Mine! I'm the heir. Not you. Father thought you were weak. You are nothing."

“ I will never give it up no matter what you do.


Aurora:

“That sounds like Daddy” she whispered to herself.


Tobias:

"Marcus let me remind you that you are no longer in control here. I will do whatever the fuck I want with your pretty little wife. She will make a pretty little plaything for myself, and perhaps I will even share her with my men."


The little girl heard screaming. She ran as fast as she could careful to try to not make a sound.


As she got closer the screaming became louder.


Aurora:

“Oh no that sounds like my mommy” she whimpered to herself.


The little girl hid behind the bookcase as she watched between the cracks. Trying desperately not to make any noise as the tears ran down her face.


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