What is your opinion?
it was really good
"loved this book"
His redemption
"Wow!!! Loved it!! Thank you for sharing your story with me "
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Amazing!!!!!
"I like everything about this novel, I would recommend it to friends "
His redemption
"I think you going to be exceptionally good in your writing you have the skills good work "
His Redemption
"So much suspense and mystery! Who shot Olly Layton or the gang from California, because I know Bar would not do that to Lil ?!? Need so much more!"
His Redemption
"Ok so far the book is ok. I like the characters. I love the way the story is leading. I always hated bullys"
Book fire asf on my momma
"I liked everything about this book it’s so traumatic and funny I enjoyed the book"
Great Job
"I think that this story can go places because it was really amazing and you should write more"
His redemption
"The story is captivating but it's too fast. Would like to have see more PDA between Lilah And bar. Would recommend to my friends"
This book will take you on a emotional rollercoaster
"I didn't take the warnings seriously and I came in blind, but this book is 🔥🔥 not your average teenager bad boy story."
Not a review - feedback
"Here’s feedback, rather than a review. I have read lots of stories from new writers, but yours has had the worst grammar and spelling I have come across. Take it as construction feedback. I ask you complete a review of your writing before publishing to the public. This story does have the potential to be good. With the errors, it’s hard to read through and understand the plot. "
His Redemption - Not worth it
"I’m not trying to be mean, but honestly it was very frustrating to read- I could only get through about a third of the book before I just couldn’t force myself to read it anymore. Basic grammar mistakes are everywhere that would be fixed with a simple proofreading (and as absolute pet peeve of mine- I just can’t stand it). I couldn’t tell you how many times while reading this I literally thought to myself “Uhg, again” when reading some silly grammar mistake that just ruined all of the emerson into the story I might have had. The very structure of the writing is quite scrambled and needs more organization and forethought. It seems more like a rough draft of a story than a finished product, with not enough planning. It reads like the author just wrote one idea after another down without the proper care to make it cohesive and interesting. The writing’s POV switches when convenient to the author rather than when it would best fit the narrative. The world it’s set in is given basically no background and the reader is just expected to believe everything that’s being written as believable. The plot is rather predictable— with events just happening one after another with no real buildup of any suspense or wonder. There’s no reason to really get invested in the characters in the first place: they’re bland and generic, based on tropes rather than real people. Relationship are explained rather than earned and the characters have no chemistry to make the relationship on ships feel earned. Could this story be salvaged?- of course, but it would take quite a bit of re-writing and drastic changes to the very core of the story. —I’m being hyper critical here, but that’s cause I would love to see this story come into fruition. No hate intended <3 "
