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What is your opinion?
Captivating
"Very interesting take on following the KIPO animation series, this was interesting to read and to follow each characters growth/friendship."
Potential
"Overall, I liked the concept; the way animals turn against humans and force them underground. The character names are good, as well as the idea. But you do need to work on a few things. Dialogue, for one. This is not a script, so I advise using speech marks instead of writing it like a script :) There are some spelling mistakes which can be fixed easily. I do think you should work more on fixing the story so that it all fits within the realm of possibility. This will be a great story if you fix it up a little! Well done for starting a story. Not many people can do that. Keep going!"
