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Kaley

"It was cute and perfect"

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the 8ntold story

"amazing"

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The untold story of Harry

"I love it you have I great writing style and it really hooked me in."

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amazing

"the plot and all the different characters you put I here a amazing can't wait for more!!"

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<3

"i really like your story! the plot is really unique. i assume that harry is voldemort's dead lover?;) hope you update soon!"

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A very average story

"very average i have nothing to say about it, and i also don't want to say anything about it because there is nothing to say. It's not too good or too bad. The plot is a normal plot: there's a backstory, characters are introduced in an ordinary way, something happens, etc. Everything else is the same."

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Its not the worst.

"Not being horrible, Just advice. Me and many people don't like fanfictions where characters are added in, maybe write a fanfiction where its just the original characters. Also, descriptions and length of paragraphs matter! :)"

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