Prologue
Hi, my name is Gwen. I’m from United States of America. I have my 6 best friends Kai’sa, Daya, Kali, Ahri, Ariana and My sister best friend Jett. Kali is the strongest girl out of everyone. Kali loves to rap. She is also good at spray paint, dancing, rapping, and etc. Kali is also really a good friend and she tries to protect me or anyone else if something goes down which is what i love because that makes her an amazing friend. Kai’sa is my oldest friend and the best dancer i ever met in my life. She’s also the best friend who helped me get over my dumbass of an ex boyfriend who cheated on me with my now best friend Ahri. Quick back story on Ahri: she’s the woman who my ex boyfriend cheated on me with but she left him because of how he treated me and her (he treated her like crap while cheating with her). So me and Ahri ended up becoming wonderful best friends who have each other’s besties. Now on to my bestie Daya: Daya was the girl you come to when you’re in trouble or you need help. Daya is also the girl who will tell you off if you fucked up or if a guy treats you wrongly, well when i told her about what happened with me and ex boyfriend, she got extremely mad and wanted to teach him a lesson but we all know where that goes so i told her thank you but i don’t want her going to jail because she wanted to teach my ex a lesson (which is what she appreciated). Ariana is my last friend who is the youngest of all of us, she’s the funniest, cutest, nerdy, and chill-back-also-rapper girl you will ever meet. She’s the most important because she is the one who had me meet my ex’s older brother (my boyfriend who i’m sleeping with lol). She’s also the one who told me to meet my ex partner in the first place so when she heard that he cheated on me and his mistress left him to be friends with me, she was furious but also heartbroken because that’s her best friend as well. But i told her it wasn’t her fault or Ahri’s fault (he was trash) which made her smile. Oh I almost forgot my bestie Jett who is my actual sister, a-video-gamer-cool-chill girl who will automatically screw you over if you mess with me. Jett got cheated on herself by her ex girlfriend (she’s lesbian) who used her to get with a guy. Jett almost lost her life by her own hand because she was destroyed, depressed and lonely but i helped her get back up and fight back so when i got cheated on by my ex boyfriend and the mistress became my best friend because of his cheating behavior, jett was absolutely furious and wanted to screw him over (which i let her). I’m still thanking her for doing so as we speak. All of my friends helped me out a bunch and it made me really happy. But also i found out that i was pregnant by my ex boyfriend (i aborted the baby because i wasn’t ready). I almost ended my life after the cheating and the pregnancy. But i came back from the edge and i eventually got over it. That wasn’t until my besties helped me get together with my ex boyfriend’s smart overprotective older brother Jake. Jake is the dream guy (tall, handsome, tan, dark brown hair, muscular, and very athletic). I wasn’t interested in him because it was awkward and it was my ex boyfriend’s older brother. So i thought at first ew why should i be with him? But then he introduced himself and took me off my feet in a instant. He’s my fiancée now but he’s my boyfriend for reference. I thought wow Ethan is gonna lose his shit when he hears about his older brother meeting his ex girlfriend who he threw away (which he did). When my ex boyfriend found out, he fucked up my boyfriend’s life. He tried to spread lies, gossip, turn people on us, and anything else but nothing worked because my boyfriend knew his younger brother was full of shit and didn’t need a woman to make him happy: he needed therapy. (I have to agree). My boyfriend, my besties and all of his friends including me all exposed him for who he is to his parents who didn’t know anything about his cheating addiction, the rest of his entire family who already knew before hand, and classmates at school who all knew but also didn’t know everything. Everybody disappeared from his life and Ethan became a nobody. His cheating addiction was out so all was left especially after everything was the knowledge that he needs to move on, leave my city, and be gone. My boyfriend Jake is amazing. After everything that happened, he took me out for our first date and it was freaking amazing. He hugged me for the first time and kissed me too. He and i grew closer together as friends at first and then around date 8, he asked me out (of course i said yes). He and i started dating immediately afterwards and everyone cheered me on. 5 years later, he’s my fiancée now. But i’m gonna tell you that you should never let a man ever treat you like shit because he has a crappy personality and behavioral issue. He doesn’t deserve you.
Now let’s get into the story (for reference everyone in the prologue is involved).









twist words a little, be indirect, keep going good work
Love the start, but do think you could give some space between the paragraphs; it would make it easier to read and follow along.
i only came back around 2 months ago (January)