A soldiers calling

"I like the plot, the idea of the book is very interesting. I like military and stories from that environment are on top of my list :) it is slowly progressing but it is okay. I really enjoyed reading it. Only thing which was for me very confusing were your long sentences. One paragraph was one sentence and it was eight lines, or rows. Hope you understand;) it is just too long and it happened to me for a few times, that I had forgot what I was reading about. But other then that, you did a nice work, keep going :) "