What is your opinion?
Great!
"I think the story is good with very few mistakes but hardly noticeable. It's just great and a real page turner."
APPLAUSE
"I almost thought that this was one of those alpha-wolf x reader books (not that I don't have a problem with them. It's just that they're everywhere and I want to see new recommended books) The writing is not bad but try to have the characters talk their age and not like they're in a different time. I'd go on about how much I love this book but we'd be here all day so to put it like this, write your chapters out on Microsoft word doc or google doc. It's a huge help because the software can point out the classic punctuation, grammar, spelling, delivery, etc errors."
Well done!
"I never thought I'd read this story in one sitting, but I couldn't tear myself away. I love sci-fi and this is a great story. Worldbuilding is a very hard thing to do and I think you executed it perfectly, so good job on that. A few conversations between the characters made me laugh out loud, and I rarely do that while reading. I love your style and characters, their lives, everything. I found a few slight punctuation mistakes that can easily be fixed. One chapter you forgot to name (chapter 17) and there were a few instances where the chapter title was at the bottom of another, my guess is that you converted this from a document and it messed up the layout a little. Again, it can easily be fixed. I did think the characters talked quite formally for their age sometimes, so try to make them sound more their age. I also noticed some chapters are very short while others are quite long. This is just a preference, but I do suggest making them all roughly the same size. This is just an opinion, however. Overall I loved your book and I think it has a good chance of being published. You are a wonderful author, keep going!"
